Second Rough Cut

My second rough cut clearly shows the progress of my editing.
I have included some of the finer details from my plan, which has brought the clips together well and filled some of the empty space that was seen in my last rough cut. I still feel that some of the edits are too choppy, this is because there is still a small section of the narrative I have yet to include; the burning photograph. This section will also enhance the meaning of the video by improving the perception of time.